WWW
You have used visual material to illustrate your roles.
You have improved your work from last time, but it could still be more detailled- the images used should show particular aspects of music video and could be captioned to show this- e.g. close up, singer looks directly at camera etc.
EBI
There are posts missing.
You have not discussed your development from AS to A2.
You have not uploaded the planning documents you made in advance of the filming day.
You have not explained the screen grabs of final cut- how do you use it?
The photograph of someone using Final cut is not you. You should upload the photo of you and discuss it- WWW and EBI of your editing skills.
There is a lot of work missing here Jordan.
EFFORT - IN
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